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"The Rules of the Game" by David L (recreational sex)
10, 10, 10
"The Rules of the Game" by David L (dhl@elektra.sysun.com). Ria and Tom have agreed to remain friends rather than lovers. If they became lovers, they reason, then they would stop being friends. Everybody (including Billy Crystal) knows that. They used to have recreational sex, but they have vowed never to do that again. In fact, they vow never to do that again every time they have recreational sex together. Anyway, they decide to hump one more time and then to re-vow; and so they go off on a little odyssey to accumulate the props they will need for their escapade. The scene in the porn video store rivals the condom scene from "Summer of 42." They go to great effort to keep the clerk from knowing what they are planning to do, but he obviously knows all along. The only flaw in this sequence is that the clerk comes into the back room to check on them. In real life, he would simply watch them on the ubiquitous security camera. The hottest sex scene occurs while they are watching the porn video. As you may know, the actors and actresses in porn flicks sometimes lack both acting ability and interest in their activity. However, in this case the actresses come alive during the compulsory lesbian scene, and so do Ria and Tom. The story is a wonderful combination of awkwardness, humor, and spontaneity. It's a very sexy story. Ratings for "The Rules of the Game" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |