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"Kissing Cousins" by Candy Kane (ff adolescent sex) 10, 10, 10
* "Kissing Cousins" by Candy Kane (rytr33@hotmail.com). Guest review by David Rills. Pamela, 18, is baby-sitting her 13-year-old neighbor, Michelle. The two girls are sitting in front of the TV when they channel surf across the adult channel. After scenes of a boy and girl making love, two lesbians appear on screen. The scene sends Pamela's thoughts back to the sexual encounter which she had with her "kissing cousin," Becky. Awakening from her reminiscence, Pamela finds Michelle on top of her begging for sex. The story is extremely well done and the dialog is convincing. The plot is very believable and the descriptions of the lesbian acts between innocent young girls is arousing. This story is well worth the reader's time. Ratings for "Kissing Cousins" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 David (appeal to reviewer): 10 |