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"Me and An Older Lady" by Unknown Author (boring sex)
8, 6, 1
"Me and An Older Lady" by an unknown author. Guest review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com) Oh great. Another one of those arcticera.com stories. Well let's see if it's boring, lame, or obnoxious. If I'm lucky it might just be mediocre. Looks like lame bordering on mediocre -- well at least it was short. OK, 19-year-old guy comes home from college and gets a summer job at a factory where all the women are OLD like his mom but amazingly enough sexually harass him like he was a stripper on a construction site. But 37-year-old Ellie defends his honor and takes his virtue as a birthday present (his). The sex was decently described and the words were all in the right places, but it just didn't move me. I never fell into the story. I never really cared for the characters. I didn't really believe them. But it was readable, and it was short, though I can't imagine anyone paying arcticera.com money to read things like this. Now, I have a fondness for older women; but even I couldn't ferret out an appeal for this one. Ratings for "Me and an older lady" Athena (technical quality): 8 -- No mistakes, Celestially average. Venus (plot & character): 6 Sandman (appeal to reviewer): 1 |