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* "Justice" by Michael K. Smith (child molestation)
10, 10, 10
* "Justice" by Michael K. Smith (mksmith@metronet.com). {Story Link: entering puberty, her father saw her naked one day and came to her in bed that night. He told her that here mother no longer took care of his needs and that he wanted Susan to help out. Then he fucked her; and it hurt. Her father had split neatly into two people in her life. There was her Daddy, whom she loved, who dropped her off at the school bus stop and helped her with her homework, and who did nice things with her. But there was also the man who came at night whenever the two of them were alone, and put part of his body inside her body. When he came, he never struck her, or put the pillow over her face, or anything so dramatic. They simply had sex. Both of these men said they loved her, but she now understood that word to have two different meanings. And neither man ever mentioned the other. It never occurred to Susan to say anything about their relationship to her mother or to anyone else. She simply got used to the visits and outwardly accepted them. This is a very realistic description of typical pedophile activity. It is not as enjoyable as the stories that describe "family fun" as a neat way for children to grow up. I want to remind you that I have given high ratings to well-written stories that present sex between adults and children in a much more pleasant light than this one. I mention that because I don't want to sound overly moralistic in this review. All I am saying is that I have known lots of children who were sexually abused, and this story comes closer than any other I have seen to describing the TYPICAL reaction of a child who is coerced into having sex with her father. This story is not a turn-on - even though it does have a "happy" ending; but I urge you to read it anyway. It's one of the best stories I have ever seen on this newsgroup. Ratings for "Justice" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |