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"The Bedpost" by Michael K. Smith (sex with a bedpost)
10, 10, 10
"The Bedpost" by Michael K. Smith (mksmith1@bellsouth.net). Guest review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). Story link: A man and a woman meet in a passionate embrace. The man lifts the woman high in his strong arms. They kiss and taste each other's flesh in this highly erotic scene before the man lowers the woman onto the bedpost. This gives a whole new meaning to the term "woody", and I have to admit I was as turned on as the woman purported to be. Nice start. After bringing the woman to orgasm with the bedpost what's left to do? My guess would be for the man and woman to go at each other like cats in heat. Ah how wrong I was. From here the story takes a darker, N/C turn. The same raw power and dominance that so excited the woman earlier is turned on her as she's lowered again onto the bedpost for a squeamish anal scene. This sort of sex is definitely not recommended in real life, one small slip could literally impale one's partner. In fact the story ends implying just that sort of slip, only not so accidental. The first part of this story was a major turn-on, the last part of the story was a suspense filled horror story that had me on the edge of my seat. The ending squicked me to no end, but that did not mean I wasn't affected by the ending. I read the last few pages with a mixture of fascination and dread with ragged breath and my heart pounding in my chest. Some stories can make you think. Some stories can make you go "Hmmm." This story made me feel and despite the squick factor I enjoyed it. Ratings for "The Bedpost" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Sandman (appeal to reviewer): 10 |