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"Carol's Understanding" By EzRiter (family sex) 8, 6, 2
"Carol's Understanding" by EzRiter (posted by dee@onramp.com). Guest review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). {Story Link: (To the insipid theme of the Brady Bunch) Here's a woman with two daughters And a boss with a really horny son Each of them had the hots for one another Why don't this sound like fun? Well lets start out by, letting mom Catch her daughter with the boss' randy son Whip out the ol' trusty hairbrush And spank him on the bum Well the boss now, he's not to pleased But I'm sure an arrangement can be made See the daughter never got her righteous spanking And there's a price to be paid. So the mother, brings her daughter To the man she's been scheming to engage And they all end up doing one another Until you turn the page. Then the boss and, the liberal mother Finally tie the knot in blissful serenity And what better present for your new hubby Than the youngest's virginity? This story, was really silly And the sex wasn't even very hot I think it be just dandy If this was one you dropped. Oh why, can't I stop? This review just keeps on going on and on I think I've just doomed myself To hear it all day long. Carol's bunch, oh Carols bunch That's the way they became Carol's bunch! Ratings for "Carol's Understanding" Athena (technical quality): 8 -- Average with some mistakes. Venus (plot & character): 6 -- Plot? Uninspiring sex. Sandman (appeal to reviewer): 2 -- Well the review was fun. |