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"The Wedding Conception Retribution" by EzRiter (revenge)
8, 5, 5
"The Wedding Conception Retribution" by EzRiter (ezriter@hotmail.com). {Story This is a follow-up to "The Wedding Conception." It's really not very much about sex at all. Instead, this story simply describes how Bob gets pissed off and carries out a vendetta against his wife and Steve, who has been boinking Lisa. I guess this is the sort of thing an upset man would do when he has little real personality and no other way to solve his problems. Personally, I think it would have been more interesting to wall somebody up alive in a wine cellar or at least tie the victim to a table while a huge ax swings back and forth on a pendulum, gradually coming closer and closer to the vital organs of the adulterous asshole. Naw! A story like that would never become popular. Ratings for "The Wedding Conception Retribution" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 5 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 5 |