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"Such A Gift!," by Quasi Bear (bdsm) 5, 5, 3
"Such A Gift!," by Quasi Bear (q_bear@hotmail.com). Guest Review by R'khaan (rkhaan@ix.netcom.com). If semi-hardcore S&M is your cup of tea, this story might be just what you're looking for. The author doesn't waste much time getting to the point of the story as the narrator's sitting drinking iced tea with Gina, some PYT (pretty young thing) his wife, Alex, has picked up from some where. The narrator was told by his wife to keep his hands off Gina - she a treat for him. Once Alex gets home, she orders Gina to strip right there on the porch and proceed to put a choke chain and leash on the girl. What happens next is a mixture of bondage, S&M and audio-voyeurism - the narrator isn't allowed to watch the proceedings. So, within earshot but out of site, the narrator listens to Alex having the time of her life with Gina. The author does a good job letting you use your imagination as to what's going on behind the closed door. After a while, Alex emerges and leads our horny narrator to the scene - his gift, I presume. Once in the room, he finds Gina trussed and stuffed like the proverbial Christmas turkey; an interesting touch is the presence of needle caps in great abundance in the room. I'm surprised the author added the needles, with all the concern these days over HIV, AIDS, and hepatitis. However, whatever floats your boat, right? Anyway, the narrator gets to have his way with the helpless Gina, much to his (and Gina's) delight. What tickled me was the part when Alex asks her master, the narrator, for permission to cum. He gives it and she blows her cookies instantly and gives big time props to the premise that women are in better control of their orgasms than men are. Hell, I wish I could get my woman to come on command… In his preface to this story, the author warns this story may not be appropriate for the usual groups - and grammar freaks. With this in mind I'll get to the technical aspects of this story. Throughout the story, you can tell the author is either British or Canadian by his use of the UK spelling of the word "civilized," spelled with an "s". Grammatically, it's not bad; however, there are too many short sentences for this reviewer's liking. Ratings for "Such A Gift!" R'khaan (technical quality): 5 R'khaan (plot & character): 5 R'khaan (appeal to reviewer): 3 |