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"The Ballad of Jenny Mae" by the BEAR (ballad) 9, 7, 7
"The Ballad of Jenny Mae" by the BEAR (posted by Commander Jamison). There are two authors who post here who call themselves the Bear. This one is the Older Bear. He often writes about sex between adults and very young people. The Younger Bear never does that. This story is in the form of a ballad. If you read it, just imagine Johnny Cash singing it to the tune of "Sink the Bismarck," and it will all make sense. As the author tells us right up front, the older man has sex with the younger girl, but he pays. Poetry - even a raunchy ballad - evokes very subjective reactions. I may have been influenced by the fact that a song about an old guy fucking a 14-year-old is not my cup of tea. Of course, my husband has been lusting over Lee Ann Rimes since she was that age, but that's something entirely different - isn't it? Still, this was an interesting if not euphoric little ditty. Ratings for "The Ballad of Jenny Mae" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 7 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7 |