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* "Virtual Reality" by Rajah Dodger (virtual reality sex)
10, 8, 8
* "Virtual Reality" by Rajah Dodger (rdodger@mailmasher.com). Carol signs herself and her boyfriend up for a sexual virtual reality experience. The story is currently incomplete. It consists of separate descriptions of what happens to Ken and to Carol. It's difficult to tell when reality ends and fantasy begins, but that's the idea. Important ideas are undeveloped, but that's because the story is incomplete. I suppose the author wouldn't mind if you sent him ideas or even developed your own plots along the same lines. It's a creative train of thought. Ratings for "Virtual Reality" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |