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"The Old Man's Office" by Godiva (business sex) 9, 7, 9
"The Old Man's Office" by Godiva (Godiva@starmail.com). Guest review by Fiddler. Ryder and Dahlia are engaged in a conspiracy to take over a company from Ryder's uncle, the "old man" of the title. They seal their agreement by having sex on the couch in the old man's office. One of the pleasures of this story is that the reader learns what is really going on, and even what will go on next, without ever being told. The sex isn't very sexy, but it wasn't intended to be. The language doesn't quite live up to the plotting, however. Dahlia, as described, is hardly the type of person to use "maroon" for moron; does anyone off Usenet do that? Another problem with the story is that the author chose to post it in MIME. It was certainly a story, however, which makes me want to read the author's next one. Ratings for "The Old Man's Office" Athena: 9 Venus: 7 Fiddler: 9 |