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"Unexpected Rewards" by D. Nasakcuf (foot fetish) 8, 9, 6
"Unexpected Rewards" by D. Nasakcuf. Guest review by Theodore Spoonbender (theodore@spoonbender.demon.co.uk). This is the story of a College Nerd's coming of age. It is also a story about Foot Fetishism. Now I'm the first to admit that this sort of thing is not exactly my cup of tea. If a young lady was to suddenly aim her foot directly at my crotch my immediate reaction wouldn't be 'Oh right, she's going to get me off.' But then again, if people like it, then who am I to put 'em down? The story itself revolves around a College Student who completes some work for a couple of girls in his class who reward him by masturbating him with their feet. Now as fantasies go it is probably more fantastic than most. For a start he managed to find two teenaged girls with a social conscience that would have left Mother Theresa feeling guilty, coupled with a perception that would make Plato look positively dizzy. For example if I stared at a woman's feet would she immediately think 'Ah, he wants me to masturbate him with my foot.'? I suggest not. I...ahem.. have been known to peruse a woman's mammaries but that doesn't mean that......Anyway I'm sure you get the picture. Also, if I were taken back to a private apartment with two nubile young ladies then my first thought wouldn't be that I yearned to watch the Return of the Jedi. But then again I might just be a little jaded. Overall the story was fairly well written and quite enjoyable, as it happens. Although it did have a few too many 'in' words for someone from this side of the Pond and, at one stage, it sounded like a class tutor's homily on the perils of leaving it too late to complete your work. Other than that, it showed a goodly amount of imagination and, in my opinion, artistic flair. I could never say I'd ever love this genre but I did find myself getting through it without feeling homicidal, so it couldn't have been all bad. If I had to sum it up in one word, I'd say it was 'cute'. Ratings for "Unexpected Rewards" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 9 Spoonbender (appeal to reviewer): 6 |