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"Flashback" by Magician (foot fetish) 9, 9, 9
"Flashback" by Magician (a-magician@mailcity.com). This review is the personal opinion of Kim, who can be contacted at ghost@nym.alias.net Well now, this is an odd one. One person's fetish is often another person's joke. As I read this, I couldn't help it; I had a smile playing about my lips for at least the first third of the story, not least because the self- satisfied preening of the narrator. It's just a guy relating his rather odd obsession with women's feet. He goes into great detail as to just what it is about them that he likes, and then launches into relating his greatest fantasy, and promptly includes all the elements he's previously mentioned. Whichever way you look at it, it's quite an accomplishment to create a sense of deja vu within the first half of such a short story. But then a funny thing happens. Without warning the story isn't a vaguely amusing wander down the back alleys of human sexuality anymore, but turns into something a deal more interesting, if perhaps bleaker. As an example of how a woman can be turned into an incidental object for a man's off-center desires, this story is very well done. All of which leaves me in a quandary. Is this the simple straightforward telling of a fetishist's desires, or is this a very adept author getting into the mind of somebody with those fetishes? The only answer is -- I have no idea. So, to follow my own guidelines, I'll have to go with the second option. Under such circumstances, I'd have to say it's a very interesting piece of writing. Now all I've got to do is work out if it appealed to me... Ratings for "Flashback" Athena (technical quality): 9 (no complaints) Venus (plot & character): 9 (I like stories that hint at deeper meanings) Kim (appeal to reviewer): 9 (Don't think many folk will find it arousing, but I like "odd") |