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"Journey's End" by Sven the Elder (hot time on a cool night)
10, 10, 10
"Journey's End" by Sven the Elder (sven@brass-neck.demon.co.uk). Sometimes I get the Impression that when Sven the Elder was Younger, he was one hot guy! Maybe he still is. In this story Sven is riding home in a crowded car from a dance. Seated securely on his lap is a somewhat older girl who is not his girlfriend and with whom he has never shared any mutual interest up to this time. Something pops up, if you know what I mean they consummate, the ride is over. No problem; she asks her Dad, who is driving the car, to swing by and pick her up after he drops off the other kids. For the next twenty minutes they have a hot time on a cool night. This is a very good story. Ratings for "Journey's End" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |