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"Dealing with a Bastard" by EzRiter (threesome) 9, 9, 9
"Dealing with a Bastard" by EzRiter (Posted by "Don Ellis" Jack, the eponymous hero of this story, is not a literal bastard; the term is a metaphor - a synonym for "asshole." Actually, he's not an asshole either: the term is a sort of pet name for a delightful fellow who manages to have his way with two women - the bastard! Ya see - Jack is bopping Mary, but he has also been playing the furry fiddle with her best friend Debbie. They don't object to this arrangement (since they are best friends and used to do wonderful things to each other and would again if given the chance), but they do object to Yvonne, a DDD specimen who is seven years younger. I presume the letters in the preceding sentence refer to Yvonne's grades in English, math, and science. Anyway, Jack and the girls negotiate; and the three become one Big Happy Family. Ratings for "Dealing with a Bastard" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |