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"Girl Talk" By Assmaster McStuff (chat session)
"Girl Talk" By Assmaster McStuff (assmastermcstuff@hotmail.com). This review is the personal opinion of Kim, who can be contacted at ghost@nym.alias.net. There seems to be developing a new genre of sex stories; the pretend chat session. This story tries its best to appear to be a transcript of real live chat session between two women, one called "Hobbs" (romantic, huh?) and the other, "Shel", but whose chat name is "Bi 4u". Overlaying all this is Hobbs's boyfriend, the narrator of our saga, who provides the introduction, and the odd aside, on how he feels about what the girls are typing. This story is at least not as dull as the previous one of this type I had to review, but against that, it is nowhere near as authentic a representation of a true transcript. The general plot, if you could stretch the meaning of the word to cover this, is simply two women writing about how they imagine making love to each other. And, erm, that's about it really. As a genre I still hold to the view that chat sessions are not a spectator sport, and are much more enjoyable being involved in, than reading about after the fact. So, this leaves me with a problem. The last time I reviewed one of these, I didn't give any marks because I felt the normal technical standards didn't apply, and I didn't offer a personal appeal mark as real chat sessions are totally alien to me. However, I want to say that this one is better than the last because of the chat being hotter and more immediate, but worse than the last, because it was obviously more artificial. Can't say that I'd recommend it much. Ratings for "Girl Talk" Athena (technical quality): - (irritating, supposedly funny asides don't help) Venus (plot & character): - (two girls find out the true meaning of oral) Kim (appeal to reviewer): - (can't see the point of writing this stuff, personally) |