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"Door to Door Saleswoman" by Rajah Dodger (lingerie pusher)
10, 8, 8
"Door to Door Saleswoman" by Rajah Dodger (rdodger@hotmail.com). Kelli is doing her daily chores when the lingerie saleslady arrives at her door. The vivacious vendor displays her wares and encourages Kelli to touch and feel. Where is this story going? Well, not quite. The next things we know the saleslady is shoving a gag into Kelli's mouth. This is obviously a birthday present arranged by Kelli's husband - one of those pleasant rapes to fulfill their mutual fantasies. Right? Wrong again! Hmmm.... The next several twists in this story include references to a veritable scavenger's list of items, including a leg spreader, mustard, and Ben Gay, which is a trademarked name that I'm not certain the author obtained proper permission to use. If any of this interests you, you had better read the story. You wouldn't believe it if I told you about it. Ratings for "Door to Door Saleswoman" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |