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"First Time" by Bob Browett (first time) 7, 7, 7 http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=340913953 (*) "First Time" by Bob Browett (rbrowett@yahoo.com). This is a story about a guy and girl who fumble and stumble through their first time at having sex together. It's a humorous story, but it's not hilarious. Improved timing and better attention to details would make it a more stimulating story. Ratings for "First Time" Athena (technical quality): 7 Venus (plot & character): 7 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7