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* "Desire" by Patrick Donovan (romance) 8, 8, 8
* "Desire" by Patrick Donovan . Our hero is a college guy with raging hormones, but he manages to cool it and court the lovely Kathy for a little while before he fucks her. They date and eventually make passionate, romantic love. It's a good story. I hope this author eventually acquires a taste for timing and word choice that could make his stories even better. {By the way, he did - as his later stories, "Tidal Passion," "Gathering," and "Cinnamon" demonstrate.} Ratings for "Desire" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |