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* "The Wedding Gift" by Wollstonecraft (deflowering the virgin)
9, 10, 10
* "The Wedding Gift" by Wollstonecraft. Tony is the holder - er, owner - of a behemoth cock. He's also into eugenics. That is, it is sort of a hobby of his to impregnate all the girls in the neighborhood with their first baby. The first time Gina meets this behemoth cock, she is in the front seat of his Tony's, with another girl between her and the Stud. The other girl starts giving Tony a hand and mouth job, but he drops her off at her house before the task is finished. So Gina helps out with the finishing touches, so to speak. But now, many years later, Gina is marrying someone else for whom she has saved her virginity (since hand jobs started by someone else hardly count). In fact, this is a guy who is also a virgin and who has been saving himself for his wife and who proposed to her with a diamond ring after he saving up enough money to start a family. I mean, this wedding is going to take place in a church and everything. But the gang from the old neighborhood show up and seduce Gina into an orgy and gangbang her. If you grant the author's basic premises (that the friends are really doing Gina a favor and don't deserve to be arrested and that fertility can be predicted and controlled really precisely) this is an extremely sexy story. On the other hand, it's worth noting that the author plays fast and loose with his assumptions and with biological facts about how pregnancy actually occurs. For example, if fertility could really be predicted this closely, traditional Catholic women would have a lot better luck with the rhythm method of "birth control." In addition, I know from personal experience that a virgin couple really CAN have a great time learning about sex together - sans benefit of prenuptial gangbang. Nevertheless, this is a really sexy story. Ratings for "Wedding Gift" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |