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"The Resort" by Val White (wild orgy) 4, 4, 4
"The Resort" by Val White (val72@hotmail.com). Guest review by R'khaan (rkhaan@ix.netcom.com). Talk about a story which has something for everyone! Roger and Kathy go on vacation at a resort where rest and relaxation has a different meaning. They don't even get checked in before being serviced by the resort staff. From there, the story becomes rather predictable, going from one sexual extreme to another before the grand finale, which has Roger doing his mother-in-law and Kathy riding her father for all she's worth. And, to really top it off, they never made it to their room! Although properly "trashy" and accompanied with the usual overflowing streams of bodily fluids and lusty vocals, this story wasn't as well written as it could have been. Kathy's transition from being queasy about having sex with a woman to her eating coochie like an old pro could have been smoother. A bright spot for this reviewer was Roger; you just know he's down for every- and anything. This story has just about every perversion known to man, happening in such rapid-fire sequence I got tired just reading it. The only things missing were some whips, handcuffs and a couple of gerbils (maybe in the next story?). This story would have gotten higher technical marks had it not been for a couple of long paragraphs (makes it hard to read) and a few spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors. To the author, I'd recommend going back and reworking this - it has potential! Ratings for "The Resort" R'khaan (technical quality): 4 R'khaan (plot & character): 4 R'khaan (appeal to reviewer): 4 |