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"Trapped in Stone" by Redheaded Composer (sexual magic)
7, 10, 10
"Trapped in Stone" by Redheaded Composer (rhmusic@hotmail.com). John went everywhere with the woman, either tied on a string around her neck, or sometimes (if she was feeling very wicked) tucked between her ass cheeks as she wore a tight girdle and a dress. John, you see, has been turned into a small statue ("trapped in stone") by a young lady named Surrey, who happens to be the owner of one of those trinkets with magical powers. So the story is sort of a reverse Pygmalion/Galatea adventure in an Egyptian setting. Exactly how and why this happens is sort of complex, but quite interesting. The story has all kinds of grammatical - and a few logical - glitches. The author should obtain one of my free proofreaders, who have been so helpful to so many other authors. But it's already a very creative and enjoyable story. Ratings for "Trapped in Stone" Athena (technical quality): 7 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |