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"Luau: Insatiable Flame" by The Bear (gang bang) 10, 8, 8
"Luau: Insatiable Flame" by The Bear (thebear@io.com). Unlike most of the other stories in the Malinov's Spring Orgy collection, this one does not contain abundant, obvious references to the authors who frequent this newsgroup. Instead, this is a simple gang-bang story. A dancer named Flame announces that she has had enough dancing at the Luau and requests that Jed and his two friends fuck her. They do. It's not bad sex, but it's simply not as hot as some of the others in this series. The simple fact is that the titillation that arises from our knowledge of the characters or of their reasons for wanting to engage in various activities enhances stories like the others in this series. Ratings for "Luau: Insatiable Flame" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |