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"Smalltown Scandal" by Delta (affair) 10, 10, 10
"Smalltown Scandal" by Delta (delta@nym.alias.net). A teacher shouldn't come into a small town and start having an affair. Teachers are expected to have morals, especially if they are young and pretty and female. Jane, young and pretty and female, came into this small town and proceeded to have an affair. She had to go. The story is told from the perspective of the Chairwoman of the School Board, whose job it had been to give Jane the heave-ho. The story is not exactly confusing - just fragmented, and deliberately so. As we proceed through the story, it becomes more and more interesting, as we pick up details about Jane, Mrs. Pulof, and her husband. This story doesn't have a lot of blatant sex - just a good plot based on sexual innuendo. I liked it a lot. Ratings for "Smalltown Scandal" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |