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* "Pat Considers" by Mark Aster 10,10,10
* "Pat Considers" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). I'm not going to tell you much about this one, except to say that it's a good story. Pat, the elder of the lovely Allen sisters, has decided that she might like to have a baby; and she asks Our Anonymous Hero if he'd like to do the honors. The author has spent considerable effort in past stories developing the characterization of these wholesome libertines, and it is interesting to see how he approaches this question. I guess it would be appropriate to describe all three of the protagonists as wholesome, polyamorous people with social consciences. They plan to continue their polyamory even after they procreate, and their social consciences make them aware that bringing a child into the world is not a frivolous activity. Hence we have an unusual element of pensive seriousness introduced into this usually raucous series of stories. I hope you will find it as interesting as I did to see how the author handles this element of seriousness. Will the plot become deadly serious? Will the Three Amigos continue to fuck their mutual brains out? Will the burden of future fatherhood weaken our hero's erection? Read the story and find out. Ratings for "Pat Considers" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |