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* "Tryout" by Friar Dave (threeways & moreways) 10, 10, 10
* "Tryout" by Friar Dave (friar_dave@mhbbs.com). The reader immediately gets immersed in the action right from the start - Jerry comes out of the shower, finds his wife already turned on from reading a sexy magazine, starts fucking her, has her read the magazine out loud to him, and then finishes her off. In her pre-Jerry life, Connie was interested in other women; and Jerry has a liberal attitude in this regard: Be sure she's clean, don't cut THEIR time together, and talk about it if the attachment seems to be getting more than essentially physical. In other words, Jerry "is able to remain sanguine in the face of Connie's sapphic escapades." I'd say he goes beyond sanguine to just plain buoyant when he joins the ladies himself. Read the story for details. This is really hot stuff. It almost makes me suspect that the author delights in the thought that maybe his readers will get turned on while they read this story. The only flaw in this story was that either Connie or Kim had nice "aureoles." I guess Friar Dave wrote this story before my seminar on areolas. However, because I learned some interesting things about sextoys, I won't even dock him for his misspelling of the a-word. Ratings for "Tryout" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |