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"Dream A Little Dream" by Hawk Richards (masturbatory
foreplay) 10, 10, 10
"Dream A Little Dream" by Hawk Richards (hrichard@bellatlantic.net). The Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com) Short story, short review. In this story a wife wakes up from a dream and wakes her husband up in the process. "Have you ever had a dream that was so intense that you...?" she asked. That you immediately set out to seduce your significant other perhaps? Good premise. It's an excellent way to show that there's life after the wedding vows (very reassuring to me somehow). It's nice to know there's not only life after the wedding vows but excitement as well, as Carl's wife reminds him that women don't really need men when she engages in a bit of very well described masturbatory foreplay that should have every male reader (and I imagine a few female readers) panting with anticipation. In the end though it's nice to be reminded that men indeed have their uses. This is an excellent, sexy short scene. Ratings for "Dream A Little Dream" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Sandman (appeal to reviewer): 10 |