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"Broadway Limited" by FlyingPen (sex on a train) 10, 10, 10
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"Broadway Limited" by FlyingPen (reposted by john_dark@anon.nymserver.com).
Amy is a teenager riding the train with her father in a blizzard, which has
slowed the train down considerably and added to Amy's general ennui. Her
father gets drunk and leaves her with the narrator, who takes her to his room
on the train to loan her a book.

Well, he does eventually loan her the book; but in the interim they fuck each
other's brains out. This is one of those things that grown men shouldn't do
to "innocent" teenagers; but it certainly is an interesting fantasy. Pretty
hot stuff!

Ratings for "Broadway Limited"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10