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"Angel" by Fatboy (bar pick-up) 5, 4, 4
"Angel" by Fatboy (Fatboy@camel19.mindspring.com). This story represents an inarticulate incarnation of the bar-goers dream. The guy is in a bar and sees a girl, she locks eyes with him, and they leave the bar together and fuck their brains out. For a more articulate version, either read my summary in the preceding sentence or listen to a country-western song about what happens down at the honky tonk when a guy meets one of them angels who are really tigers in tight fittin' jeans. Ratings for "Angel" Athena (technical quality): 5 Venus (plot & character): 4 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 4 |