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"Smile" by Ed Miller (TG) 8, 6, 5
"Smile" by Ed Miller (zxcvbnm21@hotmail.com). The narrator has been rude to his girlfriend. Since she is a real witch, she gets even by turning him into a woman. Tina's goal is to humiliate the narrator, and she does a pretty good job. Our narrator eventually becomes an unhappy slut. TG stories have the potential to explore the feelings and experiences of the opposite sex from a unique perspective. This one falls short. It's basically a change-sex-and-fuck story. Ratings for "Smile" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 6 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 5 |