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"Greenseleves" by Thomas M. Carvett (incest) 10, 10, 10
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"Greenseleves" by Thomas M. Carvett (ck29@anon.nymserver.com). The narrator's
father, an immigrant to America from Indonesia, died when she was young. In
the months that followed his death, she could not remember a single act of his
love towards her. She did not shed a single tear at his funeral. All she
could remember was how he allowed her just six hours every week to enjoy
herself when she was still a child; the rest of the time she was to study and
work. And to serve as his sexual surrogate for his wife, who had died several
years previously.

The story's brief focus is on the impact of that incestuous relationship on
the rest of the child's life. The title comes from the name of the first song
her father used to play for her, even before she was born, in the hope that
she would some day become a great pianist. Ironically, the words of this
famous song were directly descriptive of her eventual relationship with her
father.

Ratings for "Greenseleves"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 9
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9