|
Return To the Celestial Review (This does NOT open a new window) Return To the Index (This does NOT open a new window) Note, to make reading multi-part stories easier, story links (links with dejanews.com or www.qz.to, NOT the review or profile links) will open up a new browser window. When you are done reading the story, or section of the story simply CLOSE the story window. |
|
* "Let Your Fingers Do the Riding" by Solo Polyphony
(masturbation & exhibitionism) 10, 10, 10
* "Let Your Fingers Do the Riding" by Solo Polyphony (solo.polyphony@teamhbbs.com). OK, so here's the story. A woman is riding alone in a subway car late at night. It is very cold. She pulls her arms and hands inside her jacket and hugs herself to keep warm. One thing leads to another, and pretty soon she's masturbating. After all, she's alone in the car. She is rapidly approaching orgasm, when she looks up and sees a man was standing in the aisle about ten feet away, his eyes riveted on her crotch, the bulge in his pants registering his interest. Their eyes meet. "Sorry to disturb you," he says, in the most incredibly gentle voice, "I saw what you were doing from the next car, and I just couldn't resist coming over to this one for a better look." What can you do when you're faced with a gentlemanly apology like that? She does the ladylike thing: "Why don't you have a seat?" Then she continues with the show. But first she says, "Perhaps you'd like to open your pants and do likewise?" What can a guy say after a show like that? "Hundred and Tenth!" the man exclaims after he ejaculates. "Oh, shit! My stop was 96th!" Ah, the vicissitudes of life in the Big Apple! Ratings for "Let Your Fingers Do the Riding" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |