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"Scratches" by Lord Malinov (passionate romance). BillyG: 10, 9, 10
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"Scratches" by Lord Malinov (malinov@mindless.com). Guest review of
BillyG (hayden@mindless.com).

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12449.txt
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On the occasion of their Eighth Wedding Anniversary, Malinov gives
depth to the passion of his love with Diana. In his opening sentence
he writes: "When I first slipped inside her, she bit her nails in me."

This is about passion - unchecked, ungoverned, raw passion. This short
bit by Malinov doesn't tell a story, at least not a story with a
conventional beginning or ending. It's more a reminiscence of the
intensity of their fucking, ". . . in wild ecstasies, crescent gouges,
river wound welts.

It's a good read, even a strong read, poetic in its wildness and
telling in it's wondrous simplicity. Read it and then reflect a moment.
Try to remember the passion of your own loving, how impossibly mad it
was and how you didn't give a shit about convention or propriety or
even saneness.

Ratings for "Scratches"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 9 (even if it didn't have a plot)
BillyG (appeal to reviewer): 10