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"My Sister Mary" by MikeyBear (incest) 8, 8, 6
"My Sister Mary" by MikeyBear (mkaber@mindspring.com). Guest review by DG. This story belongs in the firmly-established genre of incest between a brother and a sister as they approach puberty and discover their sexuality together. "My Sister Mary" doesn't bring any new insights or twists to this popular plotline, but it isn't a total dog either. The story is told from the brother's point of view, as he and his younger sister fool around and then they become lovers. The dialogue and characterization are more realistic than in some of the other stories about 11-13 year olds that I have read. The problem for me is that incest squicks me enough so that I couldn't really enjoy the sex between the narrator and his sister. There are some scenes where the siblings spy on Mom and Dad which worked a little better for me. I guess the bottom line on this story is that if you enjoy brother-sister incest stories, you will probably like "My Sister Mary." If not, you better give it a miss. Ratings for "My Sister Mary" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 8 DG (appeal to reviewer): 6 |