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"Seeking - The Beginning" by Unknown Author (miscellaneous
sex) 8, 6, 7
"Seeking - The Beginning" by Unknown. Guest reviewed by Poison Ivan (poisoniv1@hotmail.com). "Seeking" is a true story. I can tell because the author says so, right at the beginning. I can also tell the story is true because all the women in the story like to masturbate in front of the narrator. As I'm sure all you women know, if you want to get to know a guy fast, just masturbate in from of him. The narrator of this story gets to know quite a few women. And, just like in real life, most of the women in this story happen to be bisexual. I mean, what could be more normal? What do you do when you catch Charlene spying on you and Beth making out in the sauna? You guessed it! Invite Charlene on in! More's the merrier! What happens while you're on Julie's front doorstep waiting for Julie to come home, and Julie's best friend Debbie stops by? Yes! You fuck Debbie on the porch! And then when Julie finally shows up, you all three dash upstairs and shave off everyone's pubic hair. It goes on and on. It's all pretty standard real life stuff. On the other hand, there were a few things that didn't strike me as particularly realistic. For example, the characters seem to enjoy eating microwave hamburgers. Yech. The writing in "Seeking" is clumsy, but at least the author kept it simple. The story held some naïve charm for me at first, but it began to wear off after the first forty-five pages. The second forty-five pages could have used a fast forward button. On the positive side, "Seeking" contains a decent amount of sex, and I imagine it has some stroke appeal. If you're looking for a long, simple, consensual sex story, and you're willing to use the Page Down key from time to time, it could be a decent masturbation aid. Ratings for "Seeking - The Beginning" Athena (technical quality): 7 Venus (plot & character): 6 Ivan (appeal to reviewer): 7 |