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"Private Pool Party" by Saucy Wench (swimming pool sex) 10, 9, 9
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"Private Pool Party" by Saucy Wench (WenchSaucy@aol.com).
http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=347556897

Our 5 -foot 5-inches, brown-haired-down-her-shoulders, brown-eyed, 28-year-
old, slim, 110-pound, trim-figured, small-breasted, saucy wench has been
reclining on a flotation device in the swimming pool, relaxing in the
afterglow of a mind-blowing orgasm that occurred near the very end of a
masturbatory session in that same pool. Since the pool is in the central
courtyard, entirely surrounded by a house with perfect security, she is alone
and completely unseen, except perhaps from space vehicles with Hubble
telescopes zeroed in precisely on her lovely little tits. Except for the
stranger in the leather jacket and black jeans whom she suddenly notices
standing at the side of the pool watching her.

It turns out that he's the son of the people for whom our wench has been
house-sitting. She suddenly feels lascivious - or lewd, libidinous,
licentious, lecherous - any of those words that would describe "come-into-the-
pool-and-fuck-me" reaction. He resists her advances, suggesting instead that
she come to the side of the pool and give him a blowjob. "Mmmmph!" To assist
him in his resistance, Jack subsequently reveals that he has two of his
friends with him. The scene quickly deteriorates from those L-words at the
beginning of this paragraph to just plane ribald and obscene. "Fiddle de dee!"

This is a very sexy story! It has sort of an odd ending, but I suspect that's
because the author plans to build from there in the next episode.

Ratings for "Private Pool Party"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 9
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9