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"The Punishment Fits the Crime" by E. Z. Riter (bdsm). R'khaan: 8, 8, 8
"The Punishment Fits the Crime" by E. Z. Riter (ezriter@hotmail.com). Guest Review by R'khaan (rkhaan@ix.netcom.com) --- Becky Wharton had a secret. The bad part was her husband, Charlie, found out about it. Seems the lady engaged in a little indiscretion - and wasn't discreet enough, having gotten busted fucking Harry the tennis pro. To make matters worse, Harry had taped the entire sordid encounter and tried to blackmail Becky. Charlie didn't give into the blackmail and Harry was sent to jail, leaving Charlie to deal with his adulterous wife. Throughout the story, you can see that Charlie is having a difficult time dealing with this problem because his love/lust for Becky is so very strong. Yet, he knows she must be punished. After banishing her to the guest room for a period of time, he devises a suitable punishment and invites some trusted friends over to witness the execution of Becky's sentence. In the presence of witnesses, Becky is made to strip down to nothing and endures some lashes with a whip, which Becky thoroughly enjoys. The assembled witnesses are shocked and surprised as Becky is made to wear a chastity belt, taking away her ability to fuck and leaving only masturbation as her only means of sex when Charlie's not around. A rather devious and fitting punishment, actually. EZ does a great job in telling of Becky's horror when she realizes that getting whipped in front of their friends wasn't the punishment - Charlie was dead serious about the chastity belt! After a tussle for the key around Charlie's neck, he finally gives in and gives Becky the high hard one. It would be interesting to see what happened afterwards... Good job, EZ! Ratings for "The Punishment Fits the Crime" R'khaan (technical quality): 8 R'khaan (plot & character): 8 R'khaan (appeal to reviewer): 8 |