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"Lover's Desire" by J. R. Parz (magical TG). R'khaan: 8, 8, 8
"Lover's Desire" by J. R. Parz (rjzac@avid.dynip.com). Guest Review by R'khaan (rkhaan@ix.netcom.com). --- This is the first story I've read from this author and I don't know much about him. When I read the first part of the story, I almost got out my "reject" stamp; still, I decided to continue reading with the hopes that the story would prove interesting. I wasn't disappointed! The story opens with Jess taking a stroll through the mall, pondering his sudden wealth and his relationship with his new wife, Lisa. While doing so, he comes upon a shop named, "Spells R Us." Curious, he enters the store and finds it loaded with interesting costumes and the like. The proprietor greets him and gets him interested in a maid's costume - and a potion that, according to the proprietor, will make Lisa love him more by transforming him into her ideal lover. Jess is doubtful, but purchases the costume and the potion; he'll do anything to get Lisa to love him - and not just for his money. After receiving instructions on how to use the potion, he goes home to become his lover's desire. Lisa arrives home fresh from a romantic interlude with her female lover. She, too, has been doing some thinking about her new husband, admitting to herself that she really married him for his cash but also deciding he's not too bad a fellow. Jess greets her with the potion and, despite her begging him not to take it, watches helplessly as Jess downs the potion and, as promised by the proprietor, passes out. Jess awakens to find himself transformed into a woman. Dazed, confused and, yes, a little excited, Jess explores his new body, giving himself/herself several orgasms before realizing he's got a major problem - trying to explain this to his wife! He doesn't realize that Lisa had witnessed his transformation from man to her ideal lover, a girl from college named Tracy Seavers. After seeing Jess transformed, she also passed out. Jess and Lisa take one look at each other and sparks fly immediately. Afterwards, Lisa confesses to Jess that she's bisexual and that he had been transformed into a woman because of it. The two of them along with Lisa's other female lover get together and explore all of the possibilities together. Jess returns to Spells R Us and thanks the proprietor for all of his help. I have to admit this story was pretty good. There are some guys who've wondered what it's like to be a woman and, by reading this story, you can get a pretty good idea what it's like. Ratings for "Lover's Desire " R'khaan (technical quality): 8 R'khaan (plot & character): 8 R'khaan (appeal to reviewer): 8 |