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* "Peer Pressure" by Wollstonecraft (rough first time sex)
10, 10, 10
* "Peer Pressure" by Wollstonecraft (an285729@anon.penet.fi). In the past Terry has said no to guys who wanted her to go too far. Result: no dates for six months. Her peer counselor, Jenny, has convinced her to loosen up; and now, as Bobby's tongue duels with hers, she's following that advice. Being lonely is not fun. Sex is. Some choice! At Bobby's urging, she opens his zipper, takes his cock in hand, and thinks, "Please, don't try to put in me, please, please, don't!" Bobby moans and says, "Thanks, Terry! That'll be enough for tonight!" He zips his fly, takes her home, and gives her a sweet kiss on the cheek. The next day he sends her flowers with a poem he wrote himself. Yeah, right! This is Wollstonecraft, not Pollyanna. Actually, Bobby's next words are, "Mmmm, Terry, you're so tight! So warm, so tight!" You can well imagine the course of events that ensue, right after Bobby pauses and says, "Y-you've done this before, right?" She doesn't tell Bobby he is going to be a father. After he spreads the word about how good Terry is at sex, she becomes real popular. She goes out with a different guy every night and does what comes naturally. The baby might not even be his. In addition to the overall realism, what the author accomplishes extremely well in this story is his portrayal of the Terry's ambivalence. She constantly thinks one thing and does the opposite; and the contrast is, effective, exciting, and depressing. Ratings for "Peer Pressure" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |