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"Phony Doctor Examined My Wife" by Watcher (wife watching)
10, 8, 8
"Phony Doctor Examined My Wife" by Watcher (llxzt@hotmail.com). Guest review by David Rills. This story is very erotic. It is technically very well written and is narrated by the husband of a woman peeping into a medical exam room as his wife undergoes a job physical. The husband wonders if the doctor is real or just a voyeur. The narrator alludes to his feelings as his shy spouse is given a very physical exam by a stranger. My only criticism is that the author should have spent more time exploring the husband's feelings and reactions. Otherwise, his very sensual description of the exam is good. Ratings for "Phony Doctor Examined My Wife" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 David (appeal to reviewer): 8 |