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"Samantha and Selena" by J. B. Mast (sex for pay) 8, 5, 7
"Samantha and Selena" by J. B. Mast (Mastwords1@aol.com). Guest review by DG. This story started out looking pretty interesting - we find out about a discreet and expensive service that caters to the kinks of the perverted rich. One client, a certain Mr. Stern, has requested the services of two girls who have unusually long tongues. "At least this one will be different," I thought. It didn't really turn out that way, though. Once the two girls reach Stern's hotel room, the story quickly lapses into mediocrity, reading like a scene from a porn movie. I didn't think it was a good sign when Stern was described as wearing "nothing but a smoking jacket." It was a worse sign when Stern asks the girls to recite their measurements as they undressed. I mean, do you need to know a woman's cup size when her breasts are in your face? On the other hand, the vigorous, athletic sex that follows is pretty well described. I would describe this simply as a decent jerk-off story. Ratings for "Samantha and Selena" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 5 DG (appeal to reviewer): 7 |