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"Janey's February" by Janey (orgy) 10, 10, 10
"Janey's February" by Janey. "What does one wear to a small, informal orgy? Ooops... I'm getting ahead of myself. Janey and the gang from "Janey's January" (CR 265) have migrated to Florida to get away from the unpleasant winter in Boston and to soak up some vitamin D. But Florida is not a lot of fun when it rains in February - unless you can think of something else to do. Let's see.... Maybe they could go back to the motel and fuck one another's brains out. And so they do. Janey doesn't do women - at least not at the beginning of the trip, but she thinks it would be interesting to watch a really accomplished woman in action. And that's what her friend Beth is: a really accomplished woman in action - sort of like the Mona Lisa in bra, panties, and long white stockings, sitting down her legs up in the air. Hence the enigmatic smile. Tough act to follow. But Janey holds her own - well, not actually her own.... Ya know, the nuns taught me that if you tempt someone into sin, that's even worse than being the sinner yourself. If that nun was right, this author is going to have serious problems on judgment day! Seriously, this is good stuff. This author writes extremely well. I'm not going to give a moral lecture - really, I'm not; but for reasons I have discussed elsewhere, I have no intention of ever engaging in a similar orgy. I find it very time- and energy-consuming {and very rewarding} to have a really great relationship with one man. I suspect that these descriptions of idyllic relationships that involve several other people would be improbable in real life - at least in my own real life. Even when I get upset with my husband, I figure it's better to work it out than to check out the grass on the other side of the fence, which probably won't turn out to be so green after all. Lots of holy people agree with me. What these self-righteous prudes don't realize, however, is that a good story is still a good story. It's just plain stupid to deny that it would be fun to do what these people do in this story - assuming (as the story does) that it could all happen without hurting anyone. As Shakespeare put it, "There ain't nothin' wrong with a vicarious experience." That's the value of a good story: if I'm going to have a vicarious experience, it sure as hell had better be a good one. I'm looking forward to Janey's "March" through "December." Ratings for "Janey's February" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |