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* "ekiN" by Morgan Preece (sexual fantasy on train) 10, 10, 10
* "ekiN" by Morgan Preece (morganpreece@anon.nymserver.com). Since you may be wondering, I'll tell you that "ekiN" is "Nike" spelled backwards. As in "Just DO It" - the athletic clothing company. It's spelled backwards because the narrator first reads it in a mirror. I nodded sagely when the author explained this. I had already figured that part out. This story is very much like the previous one. It's sort of inspiring to know that thousands of a.s.s. readers are riding public transportation, developing plots for short stories about the people they see on public transportation. I imagine if you are the Chief Executive of a major industrialized nation you should refrain from such fantasies, or at least keep them very private until the end of your term in office. In this story the mysterious male at whom the narrator has stared emerges from oblivion and speaks to her. The actual sex content is low - all he does is tell her she's beautiful; but the innuendo level is very high. This is a very short but very good story. Ratings for "ekiN" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |