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"Remember Ol' Stretch's Train?" by PleaseCain (gang bang)
10, 10, 10
"Remember Ol' Stretch's Train?" by PleaseCain (pleasecain@aol.com). Some people - really silly people, I might add - insist that I never give favorable reviews or positive ratings to stories that are about topics that I dislike. Those people should note that this is a favorable review and these are high ratings. They should also note that I do not like or approve of what happens in this story. I really can't tell you what the story is about. The main strength of the story lies in the way it gradually reveals to the reader what's happening. It accomplishes its strong impact by using ethnic dialogue creatively and by juxtaposing events that are clear but at first don't make sense together. Don't read this story when you want to get a hard-on or have an orgasm. But be sure to read it. Ratings for "Remember Ol' Stretch's Train?" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |