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"Pizza Man" by V.P. Viddler. {Abusive Sex} 10, 9, --
"Pizza Man" by V.P. Viddler. Guest review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). In e-mail I once told someone that in ASS you can find stories that lift the human soul to untold heights but you can also find stories that remind you that genuine evil walks among us. This story falls within the latter category. Ginny and Bud, one might assume, are in a relationship; and Ginny pleads with Bud to "Discipline me, darling, please. Oh god, make me do something I don't want to do. Anything you want. Something dirty. Make me do filthy things for you, darling. I want to, please." This apparently includes Bud hitting her (hard) several times throughout the story as well as having her make a fat pizza delivery guy's day. Most of the sex is in the dialog, and a lot is left to the readers imagination. It's a well written scene about a man whose hatred of women goes beyond anything I've ever seen and a woman whose hatred of herself is unrealistically remarkable. If women as punching bags and things to be used gets you off you'll probably get off on this story. You probably won't even question how the pizza man rather suddenly appears in the middle of the dialog. This isn't BDSM fantasy sex between lovers with nice little "safewords". It's a one-sided power-trip with a little delusional spice that there are probably women out there who would enjoy this. Ratings for "Pizza Man" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Sandman (appeal to reviewer): -- |