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"BillyG and Martina" by William G. Hayden (sex story within
sex story) 9, 8, 8
"BillyG and Martina" by William G. Hayden (billyg@hooked.net). This review is the personal opinion of Kim, who can be contacted at ghost@nym.alias.net This isn't so much a story as an extended conversation between BillyG and, yep, you guessed it, Martina, Billy's girlfriend. As they lay in bed together Billy starts to tell Martina a racy story about the exploits of a mother and her teenage son, while at the same time teasing her (Martina) with light kisses and caresses. She, not unnaturally, responds to his twin-pronged strategy and is soon demanding satisfaction. What's a guy to do, under such circumstances? Well, right, but not quite how you might have imagined. Or maybe you would? I think it will appeal more to guys looking for semi-forbidden fruit, than it did me. Anal sex is fine, but I think it's probably reached a status it doesn't really deserve, due to it's frowned upon nature by many women. So after a wonderful sweeping generalization, what did I think of it? (erm, the story that is). Not bad, but not great. I thought the descriptions a bit mechanical and the dialog a bit strained at times. In fact I think I might have liked the story of the urinating mother almost as much Ratings for "BillyG and Martina" Athena (technical quality): 9 (nothing bad, just not outstanding) Venus (plot & character): 8 (fine, within the limited scope) Kim (appeal to reviewer): 8 (Well, I wouldn't have rolled over for him |