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"Questions in the Night" by"bad badbad (confusing questions)
8, 4, 4
"Questions in the Night" by" bad badbad (badbadbad98@hotmail.com). --- The approach promised by this story sounded intriguing - a series of questions to evoke poetically sexy images. The actual story offered nothing of the sort. Just a bunch of confusing questions, a weak excuse for a second-person story. Somebody could take this approach and turn it into a really good love poem. Ratings for "Questions in the Night" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 4 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 4 |