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"Questions in the Night" by"bad badbad (confusing questions) 8, 4, 4
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"Questions in the Night" by" bad badbad (badbadbad98@hotmail.com).

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/year98/12890.txt
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The approach promised by this story sounded intriguing - a series of
questions to evoke poetically sexy images. The actual story offered
nothing of the sort. Just a bunch of confusing questions, a weak
excuse for a second-person story.

Somebody could take this approach and turn it into a really good love
poem.

Ratings for "Questions in the Night"
Athena (technical quality): 8
Venus (plot & character): 4
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 4