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"Backdoor" by Bluelady (poetic anal sex) 10, 10, 10
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"Backdoor" by Bluelady (bluelady16@aol.com). Because poems are so different
from short stories and because reactions to poetry can be so subjective, I
hesitate to review poetry at all in Celestial Reviews. However, this author
writes extremely good poetry. The least I can do is call these poems to your
attention.

There's one obvious typo - at least I'm pretty sure it's a typo. When you
read this poem, change "got" to "god" in the line "got it was hot."

This poem/story focuses on a guy having anal sex for the first time with his
lover. The poetic format gives the description an emotional intensity that
would be unlikely to occur in a simple prose format.

Take a look at it. I think you'll like it.

Ratings for "Backdoor"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10