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"Supermodels" by Jan V (ff superemodel sex) 6, 6, 5
"Supermodels" by Jan V. (jan123@hotmail.com). Guest review by Dart. Kate and Claudia are supermodels, and they're working together for the first time. At first, Kate's slightly intimidated, but while Karl, the photographer, is photographing her, she catches glimpses of Claudia and decides that Claudia is the intimidated one. With that observation, Kate's usual aggressive personality begins to reappear. Then, during Claudia's turn before the camera, Karl gets an inspiration and invites Kate to join Claudia. Claudia is fearful; Kate is bold. She's so bold that Sophia, the manager in charge of the shoot, tells her to behave herself or leave. Kate leaves. Claudia has the same fearful look when Kate arrives unannounced at her hotel room. But Kate is forceful, and Claudia finally admits that she likes that which Kate offers. The story would have benefited from some editing. But for me, a more serious problem is that the characters never became people I could care about. And would two supermodels share a stylist? Ratings for "Supermodels" Athena (technical quality): 6 Venus (plot & character): 6 Dart (appeal to reviewer): 5 |