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"Three Stories" by by Jenny (quirky romances) 9, 8, 8
"Three Stories" by Jenny (jenny_grrl@hotmail.com) --- These are three unrelated stories by an author whom Kim helped. "You're The Girl" is about a conversation between a guy and a girl. The girl has asked the guy to role-play a girl, and he has trouble doing it. The story is cute, but not especially sexy. It contains no real sexually explicit activity. "In Over My Head" is billed as a humiliation story with heart. It also involves chocolate and Kim's tits. Jenny is hot for Kim and can't really decide whether she wants to delve into the realm of humiliation with her. Although the story ends just prior to direct lingual stimulation of the areola, it gets pretty hot as it proceeds beyond the loss of Kim's aureole. In "The Last Time I Saw Alex" we find Jen experiencing separation anxiety, as Alex prepares to leave her for a trip that Jen manages to magnify into the end of their life together. Again, no explicit sex, but a vivid portrayal of emotions. What irritated me was that these emotions were the sort that would drive me crazy - I would never want a relationship with a person this unstable and immature; but some people do, and such people do really need relationships with more stable people. As I said earlier, Kim helped this author, who has a problem dyslexia. In case you don't know, "dyslexia" refers to a problem in which otherwise perfectly normal people have severe reading problems, not because they are stupid or unmotivated, but simply because their neurological systems work differently than other people's - sort of like tone deafness or color blindness, but in a more important area. With Kim's departure, this author is looking for new help. If you see potential in these three stories, you might want to contact her and offer your services. Ratings for "Three Stories" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |